I use my office as an office. I work at my desk. Until this week, I piled junk on the table.
I did not choose to write in that room. In the room I painted in the basement.
The table was ready. It waited for me.
In our previous house, I wrote at the table. It sat next to a bright window in the kitchen. I drank coffee there. Flowers brightened vases there. I spread composition books there and read novels there.
Here, the table sat alone in the corner under a small dark window in my key lime office. Until this week, I wrote upstairs. Until this week, the table gathered dust instead of words.
The candle changed everything.
At the beginning of the soccer season, my son and I carpooled with a friend to Winston Salem, NC, for a tournament. The boys warmed up. Lisa and I sought a Krispy Kreme. The donut king is headquartered in Winston Salem. Lisa told me about donuts in L.A. About how the neighborhood Krispy Kreme staff knew her family.
I told her about swerving across lanes of traffic in Savannah for the neon red “Hot Donuts Now” sign. About how I owned Krispy Kreme stock.
Lisa and I bonded over donuts. We bought two dozen. We delivered them to parents on the team sidelines.
Last weekend, at a different soccer game, Lisa said, “I have something for you.” She pulled a small cellophane package from her bag. In it was a green and white polka-dotted box marked “KK.” The box was a bit smaller than a Rubik’s cube. In it was a donut-scented candle from Krispy Kreme.
Back at home, in my office, I cleaned the café table. I removed the candle from its box and placed the candle in the table’s center. During the week, the donut candle burned. I worked. The candle flickered on the round table.
It made me want to write there.
The candle transformed the room. Now, each morning, I sit at my writing table. The candle flickers there. I drink coffee there. I spread composition books there and scratch words across the page there.
As mentioned in yesterday’s post, The tension between sentences, for this post I attempted to write only in simple sentences or fragments. A compound or complex sentence may have snuck in. Simple sentences are hard!

11 responses to “It was the candle that did it”
I love the story and the simple sentences.
Nice. Knowing Hubby and his love of doughnuts, he’d probably try to eat the candle and be dismayed there was no filling inside!
The short sentence structure works well with the content. And as for the content – delightful.
Simple sentences and fragments worked A. I didn’t notice them in reading. And they added to the energy of the piece.
I light a candle in my writing room and have classical music playing softly. It sets a peaceful and creative mood.
I would gain five pounds from the cravings that candle would inspire!
Bringing light into a room makes so much difference, candlelight can be really powerful, as can clearing clutter & cleaning windows.
Thanks for explaining the short sentences-I thought it wasn’t your usual style x
Strong work!! The simple sentences read seamlessly and inspired me to try a candle in my writing space, too! I have always loved candles and never thought to burn them while writing. Thank you! 😊
I have many good childhood memories associated with Krispie Kreme donuts. Nothing else tastes like one. Alas, I can only have them very rarely now as an adult (being diabetic and all). Thank you for bringing those memories back to the surface. :D. 🙂
…must find donut…
Simple sentences are a must! Very nice piece. I want a donut candle now.